6 Word Feedback

Friday 5th October

I was apprehensive to show my work in the class but with everyone’s work I felt it fitted in well with the skill level of the group. all 6 full good

The feedback I received was overall positive. The group praised me on the detail of each individual character and the understanding of the brief. Another thing that I didn’t pick up on was that the curve of the “f” from the last word; this lead the eye back around the design and enhanced the thought of a real waterfall on the page.

One thing to work on would be to not over fill the page, also to have one or two main focus points not three or four. An additional point that the class taught me was to look at portrait as well as landscape. By changing my design I could have added some more negative space to off balance all the positive.

 

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