Starting the inside with the new design was great and it allowed me room for experimentation.
These designs felt better and had more spirit however, they were lacking connection. I added imagery but in a sinister and thought provoking way. However, in feedback the images seemed basic and random in comparison to one another. To over come this I removed all knowledge of people. For instance removed the glasses from the first image and removed the person from the next page.
Fiona Fraser's Graphics 