Mentor feedback
With these as a final piece, I decided to email my mentor and ask for feedback. He said that the idea needs greater emotion. The idea is for people to take part, share messages of hope and inspiration – I need to contextualise the work, show how it can progress.
To enhance the booklet I have changed and added the wording so that it is more engaging and you want to pick it up. As well as better explaining what has to be done.
I struggled on how to improve the board. I knew I needed to add science to it and a better key message. I started by shrinking but not eliminating the tangrams and adding a more direct message. Then I decided to play around with the shapes to create infographics to show that only 16% of the UK population are activity engaged in the art community. To add to the tack-tile feel I drew on actual sticky notes with the help of some house mates to have fun with them and create nice art pieces.
Fiona Fraser's Graphics 