Manifesto Feedback

Over all the comments were positive. The criticism being that all our work looks different and we needed to pull all the designs together.

Moving forward we need to create a logo or one thing that pulls the outcomes together.

I decided to recreate part of my design as some of the feedback included eligibility. You are unable to see all the illustration as well as the type.

I decided to push the illustrations to the front because they had the deeper meanings. Also the type is clear so can be legible. I reduced the leading so that the illustrations had some negative space for them to pop. I believe that the characters at the top are now more visible and over all the design is more eye catching.

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