From the tutor feedback, I immediately changed the colours picking 5 colours, still bright but are more realistic with colours of an actual sticky note. I have chosen a more rounded, sans-serif font. I then researched into shape art and the tangrams work so well with this project. I tried to remove the squares in the background so that the design becomes more free flowing but it didn’t look right.
I removed the booklet from the idea as the boards hold the information but decided to keep the social media as the boards cant get to all the NHS buildings.
Feedback
The mentor who works in the real world said I need to push it further. Where can this idea go? Is it just writing or drawing and can I add other elements? He said at the moment this is a workshop so how can I make this into a thing that can last? And how do I make the design so it doesn’t just become apart of the furniture?
Actions
I still believe I need to work on the uni brief to “communicate powerful & direct messages that persuade & empower people to transform their views.” To do this I will bring back a better version of the booklet and let that be an inspiration to get creative. While the board shows the benefits and why you should pickup the booklet.
This booklet can be a monthly display of the creative outcomes people add onto the work. They can submit their work via a # on social media.







































